About the Bear Arms Show:
The Bear Arms Show is your weekly source for 2nd Amendment news and commentary delivered in a fun, entertaining way. The focus is on efforts to protect, and restore, the right to keep and bear arms. Also featured are interviews with leaders and newsmakers in the 2nd Amendment community. The show is hosted by brothers, John and Michael Willett. They are veterans of the U.S Military and lifelong firearms enthusiasts. You can find them at www.beararmsshow.com/ and in iTunes and Stitcher.
The Good Parts:
The intro and outro along with some of the sound effects and production elements were great (Courtesy of Music Radio Creative). You both have great insights and experience with this topic. As brothers you have a natural chemistry. The website and the audio quality were fine. The branding with the bears is nice icing on the cake. Put that panda on a Tee Shirt!
Things That Could Be Tweaked:
It took you four minutes to introduce what was coming on the show.
You were missing the “Title” ID3 tag.
Work on your transitions. You don't need to announce that you are transitioning, just transition.
Figure out what you want to say in each topic. Then once you've hit all our points, you just figure out how to transition into the next story.
In the case of the Gabby Gifford story, lead with the story then follow it up with your main points.